I had a heart attack

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Club in Club Soda make way to my liver
From slow to go fast from last to the first
What taste would you prefer for your river?
Please tell me what quenches your thirst

Chance at a glance with a glint of you yearning
Without the doubt with thanks to this drink
Your cigarette gets cold and my coffee is burning
How about “why so?” and “what do you think?”

I had a heart attack but I’m back and inquiring
My friend I depend on the end of incessancy
The mess in me cleans I’m relentlessly admiring
Draw my chalk outline as fast as the rest in me

Death is a test in me
You have the best of me
Put
Your pretty face
In the middle of a murder scene
Go ahead
Already dead
Ran over with your Limousine


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yeah.. totally didn't get this one either... must be on different planes... LOL.. plains?? idk

I like coffee.. coffee quinches my thirst

meh... i have added the last part... just now... hm. I don't know if it fits with the rest of the pattern or flow or whatever but in my head... the way it sounds with the music i read it to... it works... and... has meaning... and... yeh... it means somthing... hope you like.

hmm.. not sure if it flows as a poem or writing... but definitly could see it being a song.. just not sure what kind? what kind of music do you see in it?

Sounds like a nursery rhyme.I can see it being said like that.
All the kings horses and all the kings men could'nt put Humpy together again.
A hit and run like the egg on the wall.
Meant to catch the spirit of being broken,fixable,and solid all at once.
Pick one bitch.Cause you inspire them all.
I rather like it. *smile*

Tisha right?  "holla back" post girl?

yeah.. it's me...

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holla back post girl?? I didn't get that either..

hope you read my all apologies post.. meant for you and a few other people

was in a bad place in a bad time.. and I'm really sorry... trying to better myself.. dont' really want to go into details.. just know that what I am doing is really working

seriously, sorry,.. I feel really awful for everything i have said or done to you.. hope you accept my apology

that would be one messed up nursery rhyme though... can't see that one... but you two definitly sound like ya'll could work on it being a song.. should consider that

Brian.
What's the new post decal of? Knowing you it's something alot more meaningful then what i can make it out to be. Blue and black and white. mmm tell me?
Tisha,
It's cool. I got mad at you because you had a whole lot to say about shit that did'nt concern you.I recognize your heart was in the right place.With your boy.So i left most of your posts ignored.I had a whole lot to say to you though.Held my toungue out of respect for the chivelry of friendship and all that it's capable of. You're a good friend to him,don't stop.
And i think we all were in a bad place at a bad time.    
*sigh*
Maybe we'll get a chance to meet each other someday soon.

thank you for your kind words, it means alot that you could accept my apology and then compliment me on being a good friend...

if you ever feel like telling me those words for closure.. I wouldn't mind listening to them.. if you don't want to post here that's cool.. my email is:misluvco@gmail.com.. only if you want to though.. I think it's important to have closure.. then again.. they say I'm crazy.. LOL... joke

closure? .......................... Somtimes you're silly?

You are a good friend.

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My avatar is a pic of Alley Cat that kody took. It's in the art pages somewhere.

LOL!!.. it's great to feel like I can actually be silly now... didn't feel like I had much of a chance before... *sigh*.. then again didn't feel like I had much of chance of anything before.. and thank you too for saying I'm a good friend.. I have to admit.. it is very nice to hear