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 Midnite
 Posts : 120
 give me a place to stand and I
shall move the earth
 Midnite
  Posted 11/07/2007 06:28:05 AM
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The smoke that is
oh so tantalizing
are mirrors that make it
oh so slowly torturing

The bars that are holding
this cage up so firmly
are oh so slowly
closing in on me

This world that is existing
in my mind is everlasting
and is oh so slowly making
my vision so exciting

Everything in its intangibility
are a sentiment of sensibility
and are oh so slowly slipping
me back to the hell of reality

I see myself falling
back to the corner crying
oh so slowly dying
in this life so suffocating

Too many memories are raging
making things so frustrating
oh so slowly displaying
a realm so igniting

Take me back inside, I'm begging
to a land that's so enchanting
oh so slowly extracting
my discomfort from intensifying

 Waffle Bob
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 The meeting of two personalities
is like the contact of two
chemical substances: if there is
any reaction, both are
transformed. -Carl Jung
 Waffle Bob
  Posted 11/07/2007 04:38:31 PM
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oh.


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 Midnite
 Posts : 120
 give me a place to stand and I
shall move the earth
 Midnite
  Posted 11/07/2007 06:37:16 PM
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bleh

 Junebug
 Posts : 176
 Junebug
  Posted 22/07/2007 11:20:46 PM
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you suck a little bit.

wait.i should make that rhyme huh?

 Midnite
 Posts : 120
 give me a place to stand and I
shall move the earth
 Midnite
  Posted 23/07/2007 01:20:19 PM
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lol.. i suck a lil bit?? why??


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